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2009年浙江省高考英语短文改错课

2009 年浙江省高考英语短文改错课
文中共有 10 处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: ,并在其下面写出该加的词。 增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧) 删除: 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改: 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不记分。

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No. 1 I always wanted to be a great scientist. I had dream of discovering a new drug that would save the life of hundreds of people. Unfortunately, I was never very well at chemistry at school and the teacher was used to get angry with me. I decided to becoming an inventor and designed an amazing new product. My parents were encouraging, but told me to be a few more realistic. A few weeks late, I had an idea of designing a pen to write with upside down. In my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out that it was not a new discovery.
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No. 2 One day, a boy and a girl who were all dressed in fashion clothes sat on a bench eating a watermelon. When they went away they left their peels on the bench instead throwing them into the dustbin beside them. Perhaps they thought there would be anyone to clean up the rubbish. I think that what a shame their behavior is. If everyone behaved as they did, the world will be a big rubbish dump. But we will live in the world of diseases. Beside, dustmen will have too much difficulty clean the world where we live.

No. 3 How nice to hear of you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. On short, things have been improving after the school began to carry out exploring study.

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In the past, the teachers keep on explaining the points. We just listened and took note. But now we discuss and solve the problems was raised by teachers or by us. After class, we enjoy all kinds of activity instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in and go to the library or surf lnternet for information.

No. 4 Never shall I forget the first time English lesson by Miss Liu. On this day, when she entered the classroom, we found out she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced herself said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say a word before the class. She went up to me and said kindly, “Don’t afraid. I believe you can do it.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.

No. 5 Everyone loves beauty. And what’s true beauty? You can get the answer to the following story. Today I went to the market with my parents. In the way we noticed a good-dressed young fellow ride by. He rode so fast that he knocked the old lady down. But he pretended not see this. To our surprise, a girl in plain clothes ran forward helping the lady stand up. We all praised by the girl. From this we know we can’t judge a person by their appearance. Only a person whom has a beautiful soul is true beautiful.

No. 6 Last summer I went to American to study at a school, where I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held a party, there I was invited to talk about Hangzhou. After which they asked me lots of things about China. But I couldn’t explain it in English clear. I felt sad. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have studied English for 8 years time, but I can’t use it very well. I must

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work hardly to improve my spoken English so that I will able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and other country in the future.

No. 7 In your email, you showed a great interest on the Water Cube. Now I’d like to introduce it. The Water Cube was located in Beijing Olympic Sport Park, and cover an area of 79532 m2. Its construction was started in 2003, and completed in 2008. It’s design plan---H2O3 was produced by the global design competition. It was cost 1.02 billion yuan. Swimming, diving or synchronize swimming can be held there. It was thought high of by officials, experts and athletes. They thought of it an incredible symbol in the history of the global Games. I hope your introduction satisfies you. Welcome to the Water Cube if it’s convenience for you.

No. 8 Last Sunday, I went to read in your library. I found anything unpleasant. I’d like to voice my opinions, that, I hope, would be of great help for you to create the more comfortable place for readers. First, there are little new books on the shelves, and most books aren’t popular today. Second, books aren’t sorted on proper order, making it is difficult for readers to find what they want. Third, the assistants didn’t offer well service. And they took not notice of the fact a light wasn’t working. I suggest you change all these as soon as possible.
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No. 9 Liu Yaru, the worker, had worked in a weaving mill in Jinan for 14 years. On 1992 when she was 34, Mrs Liu was out of the work and stayed at home. She was worried and wasn’t sure about finding other job. Some time later, she was no longer afraid being looked down upon by other. Finally She found a job as a waitress at a teahouse. She did so good in the job that customers liked to call on this teahouse. As a result,

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She makes many money through her hard work and has lived a happy life since. She has set up a good example to the laid-off workers.

No. 10 One Sunday morning Xiao Li and her father went to the People’s Park. Walk around the park, they found a girl cry by the road. They went up to her asking what her name was and where she lived in. But she knew nothing. So they have to send her to the police station, there she was taken good care. The news that the girl was lost was broadcast at no time. After some time in came the parents of the girl’s. They were excited to see their child and express their thanks to Xiao Li or her father. Then they said good-bye to each other.

No. 11 I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English

No.1 2 My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.

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No. 13 Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.

No. 14 Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.

No. 15 Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.

No. 16 In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many

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parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.

No.1 7 It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money. No. 18 The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.

No.1 9 One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!

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No. 20 Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.

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